You did a wonderful job on the first part of your script. Giving some background information about Vic and his band. You wrote about him because he was your hero . . . you needed to develop this more. You mentioned his words inspire you . . . you should have given at least three examples of those imspiring lyrics . . . then played parts of each of the songs. This would give the audience a better understanding of why he inspires you. -15
Your voice recordings were well done - loud and clear. You had music at the end but it didn't play long because your credits were not as long.
Credits were not all there - you have to follow copyright law which includes providing url's for all your pictures and where you got your information. -5
Quality points 80/100 - 10 points for being late. 70 points total.
Jenneca,
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You did a wonderful job on the first part of your script. Giving some background information about Vic and his band. You wrote about him because he was your hero . . . you needed to develop this more. You mentioned his words inspire you . . . you should have given at least three examples of those imspiring lyrics . . . then played parts of each of the songs. This would give the audience a better understanding of why he inspires you. -15
Your voice recordings were well done - loud and clear. You had music at the end but it didn't play long because your credits were not as long.
Credits were not all there - you have to follow copyright law which includes providing url's for all your pictures and where you got your information. -5
Quality points 80/100 - 10 points for being late. 70 points total.
90/100 for daily points.